January 16, 2004

Only A Test Post In A Gilded Cage

A Reflection Upon the Modern Style

Poetry that doesn't rhyme
Is laziness, a waste of time,
A blight upon the landscape that
Would be outlawed if I were King.

And poems that do not scan are worse;
How can they be described as verse?
They have no soul; their tone is flat;
They do not make one cry or sing.

This modern stuff I cannot stand.
It must be banished from the land,
While I lay out the welcome mat
For poetry with rhymes that ring

Down through these hallowed, ancient halls
And far on out beyond these walls,
To man and woman, dog and cat...
I'm out of words that end in ing.

Posted by: annika at 03:36 AM | Comments (18) | Add Comment
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1 Okay team, you know the drill.

Posted by: Pixy Misa at January 16, 2004 03:41 AM (kOqZ6)

2 Yay!!! Welcome to our world!

Posted by: The Bartender at January 16, 2004 04:12 AM (DXeaE)

3 Let me be the second to say: Yay! Welcome to Munu. Taking over the World since 2003.

Posted by: Simon at January 16, 2004 05:02 AM (FUPxT)

4 WOO HOO!!! I was gonna bring a cake but I, y'know... left it at the store. And I love the poem! A friend of mine once told me: "Hey, you should re-write your song lyrics so that they don't rhyme and then publish them as poems!" I smacked him good. And I just came up with an alternate ending for yers: Down through these hallowed, ancient halls And far on out beyond these walls, The hardest rule to learn is that a poem is not an endless thing. Eh. At least it rhymes...

Posted by: Tuning Spork at January 16, 2004 05:27 AM (msrFi)

5 Yay!!!!!!! (and, finally!)

Posted by: Susie at January 16, 2004 05:33 AM (0+cMc)

6 Maybe I should tell Annika.

Posted by: Pixy Misa at January 16, 2004 06:52 AM (kOqZ6)

7 Yay! Dang, I was supposed to be second--I helped recruit her!

Posted by: Victor at January 16, 2004 01:16 PM (L3qPK)

8 Yay! I've sent Annika an email to let her know she has a blog here.

Posted by: Pixy Misa at January 16, 2004 01:48 PM (jtW2s)

9 Wow, i'm going to cry. Thanks everybody. i'm really excited about being a Munuvian. i won't be able to start posting here until the 24th, but that poem will be a nice placeholder for me. Did you write it, Pixy? i love it.

Posted by: annika at January 16, 2004 11:45 PM (zAOEU)

10 Welcome, Annika! hln

Posted by: hln at January 17, 2004 10:12 AM (CWwGn)

11 Good to see ya girl!

Posted by: Cherry at January 19, 2004 01:03 PM (i7dMY)

12 Yay! Annika! Now make one of these goons show ya how to import all your blogger posts into MT. Glad ya finally made the break!

Posted by: Tiger at January 19, 2004 07:36 PM (hvvCY)

13 Yay!

Posted by: LeeAnn at January 20, 2004 08:42 AM (HxCeX)

14 A very belated Yay!

Posted by: Ted at January 20, 2004 10:54 AM (blNMI)

15 Yay! I'm no longer the new guy!

Posted by: StMack at January 22, 2004 11:27 AM (UquFN)

16 thank christ, an RSS feed.

Posted by: glenn at January 22, 2004 11:30 AM (1oqLe)

17 OK, so get back already!

Posted by: Tiger at January 26, 2004 03:45 PM (qWgy0)

18 Heh. It's quiet in here. Too quiet.

Posted by: Pixy Misa at January 26, 2004 09:21 PM (kOqZ6)

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